Wednesday, March 2, 2011
Story-The Last Marley
Ring, Ring, Ring the bell rang while the kids were rushing into class."Kids, we will be taking a test today over everything of this unit." Mr. Potter said in a deep voice. "Dang it" Noah replied in a whispered tone. "Dang, Dang, Dang Mr. Potter mocked. Everyone was taking a test and shockingly it was very silent. "DONE!" Noah shouted out. He never checks his answers, he just likes to be done before everyone else. Noah hums silently while drawing in his drawing book. Ring, Ring, Ring, the bell rings a second time indicating that class was over. "Noah how did you do?" his best friend chase asked. "ehhh, not too confident" Noah said. "Dang that sucks man." Chase replied. As they were walking down the hall to our next class Mr. Potter screamed. "NOAH!" "oh great" Noah said. "Hey well ill catch you after class" Chase said. "Alright see ya" Noah replied. "Hey Noah wait up your not in trouble. You left your book of drawings behind, and i was wondering if i can bring them home to show them to my wife." Mr. Potter said. "No ya you can borrow all you want, hey ill even trade ya for an "A" haha just kidding see ya." Noah says. " Well thank you Noah." Mr. Potter says in a curious voice. Chase and Noah were on the bus on their way home. Noah got out of the bus and slowly walked inside the house. "Noah, start packing for Starlgie." Noah's mom said. Noah replied. "What about Laney?" "Shes already done Noah." Noah's mom said. Noah ran up the stairs as fast as possible. "Knock, Knock, Knock." "Hey kids!" The dad yelled excitingly. "DADDY!" Laney replied. She hugged him as if she hasn't seen him in ages. Noah was in his room playing video games instead of packing. His dad knocked on the door. "can i come in?" His dad asked."yes come in" Noah said. "Whats wrong sport?" His dad asked again. "Nothing, school sucks, i suck." Noah said. "Hey now you might think somethings suck in this world and maybe even school, but i know one thing my son does not suck." His dad replied. "Thanks dad!" Noah said. "Its time for bed now goodnight Noah." His dad said. The next day they were all packed and headed for Stargile. It was a beach house they bought so they could go there every year on vacations. After a long three hours in the van, they had finally pulled up into the driveway. Noah and Laney jumped out of the car and rushed to the porch. Every time we left our beach house the mom would put the key under the mat so no one would steal it. She unlocked the door and Noah and Laney ran into their old rooms, and quickly changed into their swim suits. They both ran outside with the mom was resting on the couch in a sigh of reflief. Laney was playing in the sand making sand castles. Noah was in the water trying to jump each wave that came to the shore. "Noah what is that?" Laney asked. "Look, look, Noah." Laney shouted again. Noah quickly stood up out of the water and gazed out into the sea. "Look Noah its coming this way." Laney said. "Yeah i know i see it." Noah said. He went out into the water and grabbed it then brought it to shore. They both huddled over the object. It was a little square box with lines on it. They both looked kind of confused and curious. "How do you open it?" Laney asked. Noah touched the very tip of the box, and it opened very slowly. All they found was a stuffed bear and rocks. "What is all this stuff?" Noah asked. "i dont know Noah does it have any directions?" Laney asked. "Do you see any directions laney?" Noah said. laney shrugged. "Awwwwww, the bear is so cute. I wonder what its name is." Laney said. "Marley." the bear replied. Laney gasped. Noah and laney were overwhelmed with what had all happened in a few short minutes. They rushed inside with all the new stuff and set it on the floor. "We cant tell anyone about this Lane its a secret" Noah said. "Okay i promise." Laney replied. "I wonder what these rocks are foor?" Laney asked. "Take the rock and twist it into the air and do that to all of them" Marley mumbled to Laney, "Like this?" Laney asked. She did that to each of the rocks and all of a sudden they are all floating in the air. It looked like a double helix was being formed. Noah had a shocked face, but with a weird smerk Laney felt powerful. "Lets go to bed Laney we will see what these are for tomorrow." Noah said.[Shuting the lights off] The next day Mr. Potter came over to their house and says. "Mam i think we have a problem" "What kind of problem?" The mom asked. The drawings Noah let me borrow are fantastic, and they are called a helix which is a carrier from past to future and the other way around. I feel as if Noah and laney are very gifted thats all. "Why thank you." The mom said. The mom had no idea what was going on. As the sun got down there was a storm and it kept getting worse. The Kids were upstairs and the parents were downstairs. Noah and Laney were in their rooms the big storm kept blowing their windows." I need to get back." Marley kept saying." "Back where?" Laney asked while crying deeply. Laney was crying so hard that one of her tear drops got on the bear. The tear drop went through Marley so quick. The windows broke as the wind kept hitting them. "Laney the rocks" Noah said. Noah and Laney went outside and spun the rocks. It was raining and the waters were bad. After they spun the rocks the helix went up into the air. Laney placed Marley into the helix. "Bye Marely be a good bear." She said while crying. Noah hugged Laney as the bear went up into the sky then disappeared. They both went inside and went to bed. Laney looked out of the window in a smile and said. "I will always remember my friend" Now kids the bear appeared in the scientist room. He finally found what he needed. That teardrop from Laney was exactely it, it was DNA. DNA was what they were looking for all along. The future was restored and that my darling was The Last Marley.
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